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Submitted: September 22, 2012
Image Size: 2.2 MB
Resolution: 1200×1000
Submitted with: Sta.sh

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.+ Lightin' Up The Night +.by *JayP617

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Fantasy

Edit: 09-23-12 3:52 PM Philippine time~~~ "Improved" (well not really, but yeah) the hair texture and moved the second arm. :3

BEHOLD! My first work on Paint Tool SAI.

I'm back after a one week hiatus.

This took me a while. New program... busy schedule... you get it. XD

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Critique by ~Stubbornstallion Sep 22, 2012, 8:05:28 AM

Hi! I saw your piece in my art feed, and I figured that I'd write you a critique, if that's okay!
First off, I love the colors. Everything is so light and pastel. I have to say, it's the colors and style is very appealing. I wish I could color like this.... Maybe you could do a tutorial for it? I'd really appreciate it.

The only issue I have with this piece is with your anatomy, the arm that is behind her looks unnatural and extremely painful. What I do when I'm drawing is put myself in the position of the character. If the position hurts, or I can't hold it, I won't use it.

Also, there's no shame in using references when drawing, and it can help. (as long as you don't trace it)

What do you think?

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