Thanks for your comments on the WIP. <3 They were very much appreciated. :'D
Anyways,
I. WAS. INSPIRED.
I dunno where the inspiration came from, but the whole story behind is this picture is that people may have a harder time accepting our dark possessions, and sometimes we ourselves are the only ones who can accept them.
Gah! Vague explanation! "OTL
Those who love only our bright sides misses half of our personality. Dark sides add to our individuality, but sometimes, we need someone to brighten them up.
No one is perfect.
Don't hate me for my multiple imperfections. Everyone has them.
I like the idea of this drawing. Darkness and all that isn't very original and maybe you didn't display it quite well but you're getting there. The drawing is cute I have to say but colors make me cringe...it's not the worst I've seen but they conflict with one another and it makes the drawing look bad. You've got anatomy down since it seems like your style is drawing bigger heads but her whole position seems very awkward. She doesn't look relaxed even if she isn't supposed to be. It looks very awkward...I'm not sure how to explain it. There are maybe a few things in the anatomy to work on like her arms and parts of her face. The arms are too long and her eyes and forehead are just a tinsy bit too big even it's supposed to be that way. The last thing I'll talk about is the paintbrush and the heart. The paint dripping from them doesn't drip that way and it looks very stiff and unnatural. Overall I really like the drawing. I like the theme and it's very cute too. ( :
La tecnica es muy buena y las luces y sombras se ven muy equilibrados con el dibujo.
Los detalles son increibles ya que se nota la diferencia de texturas, como lo que trae en la cabeza [perdona no se el nombre]
El cabello se nota la diferencia de los cabellos, las luces y las sombras son muy buenas...
La tecnica que usaste en los ojos es bastante realista y reflejan la tristeza que existe en el dibujo... entre la tristeza, intriga y preocupación
En general, la tecnica y el mensaje son increiblemente buenos.
Sólo que en mi opinion, si existieran otras cosas en el dibujo podría revelarse algo más sobre el significado de la escena. pero [que quede claro] eso ya son las decisiones del artista.
Wow, this really shows the part of us that, usually we wanna hide. The true is that who really love you, knows your worse side and still love you. This doodle really captures that, what we really need, someone that can understand our dark side. As usually, the color technique, I like the shadows, they add deph to the draw. Cangratulations, I still think your a really good artist.
There are maybe a few things in the anatomy to work on like her arms and parts of her face. The arms are too long and her eyes and forehead are just a tinsy bit too big even it's supposed to be that way.
The last thing I'll talk about is the paintbrush and the heart. The paint dripping from them doesn't drip that way and it looks very stiff and unnatural.
Overall I really like the drawing. I like the theme and it's very cute too. ( :
Los detalles son increibles ya que se nota la diferencia de texturas, como lo que trae en la cabeza [perdona no se el nombre]
El cabello se nota la diferencia de los cabellos, las luces y las sombras son muy buenas...
La tecnica que usaste en los ojos es bastante realista y reflejan la tristeza que existe en el dibujo... entre la tristeza, intriga y preocupación
En general, la tecnica y el mensaje son increiblemente buenos.
Sólo que en mi opinion, si existieran otras cosas en el dibujo podría revelarse algo más sobre el significado de la escena. pero [que quede claro] eso ya son las decisiones del artista.
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